【写作指导】本篇写作要求写一篇记叙文,讲述发生在你家的一个故事,以及你从中获得的感悟。写作时可根据“故事山”提示,描述事情的起因、经过、问题、解决和结尾,突出家庭的温暖和爱,以及家人之间的互相支持。☆主题:人与社会之社会服务与人际沟通☆子主题:和谐家庭☆主要时态:一般过去时☆主要人称:第一人称、第三人称行文布局:①起因·Lastweek,Ihad ahard time atschool.②经过·Iopened up to my parents.③问题·Ithought my parents would be angry anddisappointed.④解决·Tomy surprise,they listened carefully and tried tohelp me.③结尾(感悟)·Home iswherepeoplelove and helpeach other.☆必备词语与句型:a hard time,feel worried about,be disappointedwith sb,tomysurprise,instead,hug(拥抱)me,happiness,createa studyplan,spendhoursstudying,atthatmoment,realizeIhadtrouble/difficultywithmaths.我学数学有困难。*Ifinallyopeneduptomyparents.我最终向父母开心扉。Tomysurprise,theyjust listenedcarefully.令我惊讶的是,他们只是仔细地倾听着。Yourhappinessmattersmore thangrades.你的快乐比成绩更重要。*It's where people love and help each other那是人们彼此关爱、相互帮助的地方。One possibleversion:Lastweek,Ihad a hard time atschool.Ihad troublewithmathsandfeltreallyworriedaboutthecomingtest.One evening,I finally opened up to myparents.Ithought they would be angry and disappointedwith me.Tomysurprise,theyjustlistenedcarefullyinstead.Mymotherhugged me and said,Yourhappinessmattersmore thangrades.We'll face this together!Myparentshelpedmecreate a studyplan and spenthoursstudyingmathswithme.Atthatmoment,Irealized thathome is not just a house.It'swherepeoplelove andhelpeachother.
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