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第三档：基本完成了诚题规定的任务。虽踢掉了一些内容，但履盖所有主要内容。8-10分有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用了简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文的内容连贯。整休而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。未恰当完成试题规定的任务、漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了第二档：些无关内容。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的5-7分错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。校少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息术能清楚地传递给读者。未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因第一档：可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调，诃汇项目有限。，有较多语法结构或14分词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传递给读者。第二节读后续写（满分25分）【参考范文】What happened later proved that Jenny was wrong.Brucie was the perfect rumning partner.He never made excuses,never complained,and always kept her motivated.Whenever Jennywanted to quit,Brucie would bark and jump around her,pushing her to keep going.With Brucieby her side,Jenny felt motivated and energized and found renewed determination.She pushedherself harder and set new goals,gradually increasing their running distance.Finally,Jenny wassurprised to find that she might be able to run a marathon.One spring morning.Jenny started her first marathon,accompanied by Brucie.While shewas running,Brucie kept running in front of her.Sometimes,he would turn his head,glancing atJenny.Gradually,Jenny's legs became heavy.If Brucie found she ran too slowly or simplystopped,he would run back and keep barking to motivate her and cheer her up.Eventually,Jennymanaged to cross the finish line.She was so excited and proud that she hugged Brucie,thankinghim for helping her not only stay healthy but also realize her dream of running a marathon.【评分标准】1.评分原则(1)总分25分，按5个档次给分：(2)评分时，先根据所给短文的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后以该档次要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分：(3)词数少于130词，总分扣除2分：(4)主要从以下4个方面考虑：a与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；b.内容丰富性：c语法结构及词汇的丰富性和准确性；d上下文连贯性。(5)拼写与标点符号准确性也是评分的一个重要方面：(6)若书写较差，将分数降低一个档次：(7)抄写试卷原文或与参考范文一致不给分。
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